Sunday, October 3, 2010

MICROFICTION MONDAY #51

Just look at those storm clouds, Earl! I knew it would be a mistake to take the convertible tonight. Why don't you ever listen to me?

Susan posts a picture and you compose a story in 140 characters (or less) including spaces and punctuation.
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25 comments:

Susan at Stony River said...

Men NEVER listen when they should LOL -- I laughed out loud reading such a down-to-earth conversation for a fantastical picture!

Diane said...

FUNNY!!! They never listen..... :O)

Sylvia K said...

Oh, what a fun one for the day! I love it! Always wanted a convertible like that one! Have a great week!

Sylvia

Pat said...

Yeah, they should've taken the canopied horse. Cute story!

Peggy said...

Don't you just hate when that happens. You have the top down and it rains. Funny funny take.

SouthLakesMom said...

I love that his name is Earl! Ha ha! Very well done!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Poor Earl, I guess he should have checked with the Weather Report before heading out.

Jane said...

Men seldom listen. Their ears work find, but something gets lost in the translation between the ear and the brain!

Jane

One Prayer Girl said...

This is so very cute. Love your micro fiction...

Mine is up.

PG

Anonymous said...

oh good one! {claps hands} - convertible... and nag, nag, nag (on a horse yet rofl :)

Deborah said...

A good one!!

quilly said...

LOL! this was wonderful and cracked me up. So far it is my favorite!

Ellie Garratt said...

LOL. Too funny. And calling him Earl! Loved it.

Susannah said...

:-) Love the 'convertible'!

Nice MM.

My Microfiction Monday

Lenore said...

ha ha! funny

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Men! They just never listen. Funny! :)

EG CameraGirl said...

OH, a convertible! Clever!

Akelamalu said...

LOL I bet she's got an umbrella in her bag! ;)

septembermom said...

What's with men??? LOL.

hope said...

Men and their cars....um, prize horses. :)

ruthi said...

hahaha... why would he listen? it's in their DNA.

Debbie said...

Hahaha! I need to look at the others. I meant to last week and got busy. This is so cute.

I, of course, could NEVER manage it in 140 characters. Heavens, I wouldn't even be able to introduce my characters.... sigh...

Scott M. Frey said...

lol, "take the convertible tonight," priceless!

Jillian's Bella Rosa Antiques said...

Those silly men just don't trust our wisdom, eh? LOL! Fun to read these!

Dayle ~ A Collection of Days said...

Perfect!